Six sentences from my first book, The Challenge. ~~~
From behind the open halves of his silk shirt, a hard body enticed her with strength and safety. Mid-length black hair called to her fingers, taunting them to grip the perfect hanks while vivid green eyes promised long hours of sexual satisfaction. However, his musky male scent drew her the most. It rolled over her like a lover’s touch, gentle and knowing, but designed to leave her breathless. He would star heavily in future fantasies. Oh yeah, me-time was getting a completely new face.
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7 comments:
"Me time...new face" is a fantastic line. Love it and the book. :)
Yep, that's one reason why Bastion got to me.
Love the paragraph's "punch line." This is how it's done in the big leagues.
Great six and the last line gives a nice hint to her future
Thanks everyone, Bast and Mari were a pleasure to write. :)
I absolutely loved this. This is definitely one of my favorites this week. Fantastic work!
Thanks Vivien! If you could only see the smile on my face. :) ~huge grins~
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