Sunday, November 13, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday: Santa Baby, Several Stars Away


From the Kougar’s Writing Den ~

Six Sentences from my short shapeshifter erotic romance manuscript. [yes, according to the computer it is *6* sentences]

Chapter One ~ Santa Baby, Waitin’ Just for You

Rarely reckless, Kaily flung off the negligee she’d first thought to wear. It landed in a red ephemeral heap beside the tastefully trimmed Christmas tree.

So what if she’d just broken into his house...well, she hadn’t exactly broken in...more like she spied on him until she found out where he hid the extra key...lodged in a crack of the frame above the door of the Victorian mansion he’d resurrected from certain crumbling death, and now obviously treasured.

There was only one thing Kaily could see amiss in the traditional holiday atmosphere he’d created with the help of the town’s local historical club -- a garish red ribbon. The long sash had a simple bow attached to one end, and practically shone despite the low lighting.

Kaily stared at the unexpected invitation.
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Have a Magickal Six Sentence Day!

Savanna

Savanna Kougar ~ Run on the Wild Side of Romance ~
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18 comments:

christine warner said...

That was a terrific six...beautifully written and definitely left me wanting to read more!

Daezarkian13 said...

Nicely done..puts me in the mood for Christmas. ;D

Vivien Dean said...

Hee, I love the humor in this. It sets off the rest of it really well.

Savanna Kougar said...

Christine, thank you, thank you!

Savanna Kougar said...

Hi Daezarkian, this is definitely a Christmas mood kind of story. ~smiles~

Savanna Kougar said...

Hey Vivien, I'm hoping the rest of the humor does the same. Thanks!

karysafaire.com said...

OK, that's just creepy. Let me get this straight, she broke into his house and now she wants to unwrap a gift that's not hers? Or does he somehow know she's there? THAT would put an interesting spin on it. Well done!

Serena Shay said...

Fun Six, Savanna! A girl needs to do, what a girl needs to do to get her man. ;)

Kallypso Masters said...

Oh, someone's going to get wrapped up in a bow! (Or tied--even better! *shivers*) Nice Six! (And so much longer than mine!)

Savanna Kougar said...

Hi Kary, it's a small town setting where crime isn't an issue... To explain further would spoil the story. Thanks for commenting.

Savanna Kougar said...

Serena, yep, and she does. ~smiles~

Savanna Kougar said...

Hi Kallypso, you're on the right track... in part... lol...

In this case, the SIX just worked out this way. Believe me, I've got ultra short SIXES.

Pat C. said...

Somebody's about to get a present they weren't expecting ...

Savanna Kougar said...

Pat, yep... twelve passions they weren't expecting.

Krystal Wade said...

Will she be wearing that bow and nothing else? Great six!

Savanna Kougar said...

Krystal, ~wink~

Stephanie Adkins said...

Awesome six and makes me anxious for Christmas! I look forward to seeing what you have for us next Sunday! Have a great week!

Savanna Kougar said...

Hi Stephanie,you're such a sweetheart. Thank you!