I love tags. They can be fun or silly, well worked or even those which have just rolled off the tongue. The exact same dialogue can become something totally different just by changing the tag.
"I'm here," Serena squeaked, pushing back the sheets covering her now mouse-sized body. "I'm here, I think."
So I got to thinking, we have some awesome writers here as well as some equally awesome readers. Why not have a little fun this Friday and see what kind of tags we have lurking out there...
I'll give you the dialogue and you give me a silly, sassy or heartfelt tag and lets see what we get.
"I'm here," YOUR TAG HERE. "I'm here, I think."
Have a great Friday!
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"I'm here," she sultrily announced as she sauntered before the group of men here for a position with her father's worldwide company. Catching a heel, she landed plop in HIS lap. "I'm here, I think," she drily mumbled, once he deigned to assist her, but not before letting her know the apparent engorged size of his crotch.
Sorry... got carried away. Smiles!
Nice one, Savanna! Feel free to get as carried away as you would like..."engorged size of his crotch." Yum! ;)
"I'm here," she shouted, desperately trying to thrust her voice through the psychic static. Her naked body flickered like bad pre-cable TV reception before the two astonished, sexy men. "I'm here, I think." Her image stuttered and vanished.
Sam turned to Dean. "That was a short vacation."
Woot!! Pat, how did you know what I've been doing with those pistol packin' hotties?? ;)
And might I just say, prophet my ***! muahahahaha
It's barely been a week and I miss the show already. Thank God (Chuck?) for the daily reruns on TNT.
I miss it as well, Pat. And yes, thank Chuck(lol) for reruns and boxed sets!!
I'm not good at that stuff but I loved that black panther pic or is it a book cover. I don't know and I don't care I'm only here for the party.
Robin
Robbibird3@aol.com
That is a great black panther pic, isn't it?
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