Saturday, September 17, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday: Chapter Ten ~ Such Primal Hunger


From the Kougar’s Writing Den ~ White Fang, Ace Reporter

*Unedited Six Sentence* progress on the latest WIP novella...

Chapter Ten ~ Such Primal Hunger

Z’Pasha watched as speculation shadowed White Fang’s eyes. An intense shade of blue, they reminded her of sapphires thrown on top of a summer mountain lake.

Given the super wolf’s keen intelligence, and his devotion to fair play, she’d gambled on being forthright. He would accept no less. Not, and remain her friend. Or, her lover.
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Have a Magickal Six Sentence Day!

Savanna

Savanna Kougar ~ Run on the Wild Side of Romance ~
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22 comments:

Christine Warner said...

Nice 6...love the description of the eyes!

Cara Bristol said...

Sapphires on a mountain lake...lovely description. A lot emotion simmering beneath the surface in this snippet.

Anonymous said...

Intriguing and pulls you in! Great 6 Savanna!

Siobhan Muir / Meg Palevich said...

Oh man, he better it right and be fair! Great six! :)

Savanna Kougar said...

Christine, thanks!

Cara, yeah, you're right... a lot of emotion-tension.

Anonymous, thank you!

Siobhan, [love that name] thanks!

Gem Sivad said...

Beautiful evocative description and a hint about his character. Great six!

Savanna Kougar said...

Gem, great to see you! Thanks.

Serena Shay said...

Mmm...a delicious six from White Fang and Z'Pasha, sweet! :)

Savanna Kougar said...

Hey Serena, White Fang and Z'Pasha are seducing each other at this point in the story.

Karysa Faire said...

Z'Pasha-great name! I'd like to know more of their story.

Savanna Kougar said...

Hi Karysa, Z'Pasha is a great granddaughter of Bast, hence her more exotic name.

Gabriella Hewitt said...

Nice cliffhanger. Oh, Bast as in the Egyptian goddess?

Savanna Kougar said...

Hi Gabriella, thanks. Yep, the Egyptian goddess.

Pat C. said...

Lots'a goodness in six little lines. Well done.

Savanna Kougar said...

Hey, Pat, sending an air smooch to your cheek. ~the one on your face~

Pat C. said...

Glad you clarified that. :)

Savanna Kougar said...

~grinz~

homecomingbook said...

Wouldn't yellow eyes be more appropriate for a werewolf? Like the photo?

Savanna Kougar said...

Hi homecomingbook, as I understand it, there are blue-eyed wolves. Also, White Fang is not a werewolf, even though Talbot's Peak is a werewolf-dominated town. White Fang's wolf shifter kind is from another planet-world.

Savanna Kougar said...

P.S. This was the best pic I could find of what White Fang does look like in his wolf form.

Jennifer Wilck said...

Great imagery!

Savanna Kougar said...

Hi Jennifer, thanks!