From the Kougar’s Writing Den ~ White Fang, Ace Reporter
*Unedited Six Sentence* progress on the latest WIP novella...
Chapter Ten ~ Such Primal Hunger
Z’Pasha watched as speculation shadowed White Fang’s eyes. An intense shade of blue, they reminded her of sapphires thrown on top of a summer mountain lake.
Given the super wolf’s keen intelligence, and his devotion to fair play, she’d gambled on being forthright. He would accept no less. Not, and remain her friend. Or, her lover.
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Savanna Kougar ~ Run on the Wild Side of Romance ~
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22 comments:
Nice 6...love the description of the eyes!
Sapphires on a mountain lake...lovely description. A lot emotion simmering beneath the surface in this snippet.
Intriguing and pulls you in! Great 6 Savanna!
Oh man, he better it right and be fair! Great six! :)
Christine, thanks!
Cara, yeah, you're right... a lot of emotion-tension.
Anonymous, thank you!
Siobhan, [love that name] thanks!
Beautiful evocative description and a hint about his character. Great six!
Gem, great to see you! Thanks.
Mmm...a delicious six from White Fang and Z'Pasha, sweet! :)
Hey Serena, White Fang and Z'Pasha are seducing each other at this point in the story.
Z'Pasha-great name! I'd like to know more of their story.
Hi Karysa, Z'Pasha is a great granddaughter of Bast, hence her more exotic name.
Nice cliffhanger. Oh, Bast as in the Egyptian goddess?
Hi Gabriella, thanks. Yep, the Egyptian goddess.
Lots'a goodness in six little lines. Well done.
Hey, Pat, sending an air smooch to your cheek. ~the one on your face~
Glad you clarified that. :)
~grinz~
Wouldn't yellow eyes be more appropriate for a werewolf? Like the photo?
Hi homecomingbook, as I understand it, there are blue-eyed wolves. Also, White Fang is not a werewolf, even though Talbot's Peak is a werewolf-dominated town. White Fang's wolf shifter kind is from another planet-world.
P.S. This was the best pic I could find of what White Fang does look like in his wolf form.
Great imagery!
Hi Jennifer, thanks!
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